I was gifted enough to hear about
THE MOST AMAZING SCREENPLAY EVER
Okay, so kiddies, if you ask me to be apart of a project, please make sure it doesn’t sound like this..also in your proposal it’s not always good to have an asston of spelling errors.
ok so as i said its a drama,
basically its about a chick who is already somewhat in the “bad croud” she partys and drinks a bit but nothing too bad, just reguler teenage stuff.
well basically she starts to do REALLY bad stuff and starts to do a lot of stupid shit, (hxc drugs cutting…) her bf pretty much saves her and its a happy ending.the way i want it filmed starts off with just the chick getting dressed and you hear music and 3rd person dialog saying who she is. music ends and she gets a phone call (you can hear both ends)then she leaves to go to the beach with her friends and when she gets there all you hear is dani california but you see them having fun and stuff, then it goes on… but each song has to fit with whats going on, later on she goes to a party and party till you puke will by andrew wk will be on
I am going to pick through what terrible things are on here.
First and foremost, the use of “hxc”. Why can’t it be “sxc” like what makes a drug “hxc”. Also, in a list, why list that? You should have put HXC Drugs or some bullshit, or just not include that, becuase I understand what a giirl in the party scene might do if she’s “really really bad”
Also, formula…ooh boy.
Okay so I tell her, No thanks, it sounds too womanly, trying to be nice.
She then fires back with well “All dramas are womanly” I then about shit my pants with annoyance at the sheer stupiditiy of this comment.
I ended with “Have your people call my people,” and signed off.
